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Amor

Whenever I let my mind wander
It wanders off to you
Wondering how you are, what you do
I can’t help but worry

I feel so powerless
There’s nothing I can do
If only I could be there
Making you close your eyes

Forget what’s going on
Only feel me close to you
Holding you, kissing you
Smiling warmly, feeling love

Please be happy and smile back
Smile back at me and open your eyes
Let me see those beautiful blue eyes
Show me the soul I care about so much

As long as you’re with me
I feel happy and loved
Feel the same about me
Because I’m not leaving you

You once told me one important thing:
“As long as I feel your love, I’m happy”
Then feel my love burning for you
I’m not planning on stop loving you
…Ever…
©2005-2009 ~Beautifull-Freak
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Semper Grata Et Memor Amori Nostri Manebo

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:icondarknesswthn:
How beautiful. This is a beautiful poem, i absolutely love it.

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"Even in darkness a keen spirit discovers light."
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
Wow, that was absolutely breath taking!! One of your best yet Sanne! Keep up the good work!

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"There is nothing to fear, when I'm here, I want to feel your touch, because I love you so much!! Love you Stephanie!!" =LilithLairPoetry

Clubs
~Lullaby-Poetry~invisible-inc~Self-Injury-Club~Emotional-Writings=love
:iconseiv15:
that is really different to what you normally do, i love it.

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
:iconivylee:
That was beautiful hun. :clap: Good job!

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Midnight Blues
:iconegweene:
Breath taking... Very different from your other poems but still so beautiful... Great work hun! :)

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"Remember, my child, without innocence
The cross is only iron
Hope is only an illusion
And ocean soul`s nothing but a name..."
:iconsharpshooterhawk:
positively the best you've done so far...through this, your emotion rings quite clear. keep up the great work!:hug:
:iconeverbroken:
How lovely. What a beautiful way to express love for someone. You capture emotions so well, and I'm happy that you are capturing one of the most evasive emotions in a poem.

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:iconbeautifull-freak:
:blushes: You think this is my best work? I'm... flattered, really.. Thank you so much!! :hug:

PS> The Latin talk on the description means: I will always be greatful and I'll always remember the love we shared... (easier to translate into English, actually)

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconbeautifull-freak:
Thank you so much for the beautiful comment! :hug: I really thought this was a bad piece, because it's about a repeat of any I (and many more) have done before... :hug:

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconbeautifull-freak:
Aww thanks so much! Means a lot to me, this... Really.. Thank you!! :thanks::hug:

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner

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