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All I am now
Is a shadow in the rain
All I am now
Is a cloud in the sky

I keep on raining
Pouring down on the ground
I taint pure beauty
Through the living darkness

I feel like leaving
Let the fluids of existence
Flow from me like a river
Leaving me nothing but a mist
©2005-2009 ~Beautifull-Freak
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Err.. Try out.. Or something..

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:iconyour-canadian-angel:
great poem Sanne! I love the emotions used, and the image it paints in my head. *FAVS*

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:heart::rose:Far longer than forever, I'll hold you in my heart.:rose::heart:

My heart speaks but one single word, and that word is Lee. I Love you Lee and I always will! :kiss::heart:

:rose::blackrose:Lauren is the bestest ever!:rose::blackrose:
:iconsharpshooterhawk:
very cool poem...awesome imagery and wordage :+favlove)
:iconbeautifull-freak:
Thank you so much for the :+favlove:
:glomp:

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconbeautifull-freak:
Thank you very much for reading and faving!! :hug:

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconseiv15:
beautiful...

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if it wasn't you? Who would it be, who would be going through what you are. you are saving someone else from your troubles. for if it were not you then it would be someone else.

Hope ~ Faith ~ Love
:iconblackroseem:
BloodyBeautiful.


:blackrose:em

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[she never told a lie - well might of told a lie - but never lived one]
:iconbeautifull-freak:
Thanks!

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconbeautifull-freak:
Thanks! This was a try out because someone had said to me that I should try some metaphorical shit.. well, I tried.. ^^;

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Curt: Excuse me fellows, may I raise a glass to the loveliest man in Europe.
Brian: And they tell you it's "not natural"!


Nothing makes one so vain as being told one is a sinner
:iconblackroseem:
Hah! ... :D :D Well, at least you tried!

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[she never told a lie - well might of told a lie - but never lived one]

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