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Your hurt, My Hurt by *Beautifull-Freak:iconBeautifull-Freak:

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Your hurt, my hurt

Through sorrow, there was strength
Strength, you placed unto me
Through sorrow, hope
Hope, you gave to me

My hurt, your hurt
Your pain, my pain

I cry for you now
©2008 *Beautifull-Freak
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My tears fall for you



I hold you dear in my heart. Locked inside, never letting go
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~ChibiKitsune3:iconChibiKitsune3: May 19, 2008, 12:52:12 PM
So little words, so strong a message... it's amazing. The emotion is very real. You're a real poet, wow...

-Joey

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*Beautifull-Freak:iconBeautifull-Freak: May 19, 2008, 12:58:24 PM

Wow, thanks! I hadn't expected such a reply to this silly poem thing I made...

Though, I was feeling really really emotional when I wrote it..

Thanks Joey!

~ Aderyn

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~ChibiKitsune3:iconChibiKitsune3: May 19, 2008, 1:04:43 PM
I don't think it's silly. Sometimes it's the simplest poems that show the most emotion. I rather like this one.

-Joey

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If all my friends jumped off a cliff, I wouldn't jump after them.
I would catch them at the bottom.

:pride:
I am a part of the GLBT community. I am not ashamed.

Save a Nobody!
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*Blackittyrose004:iconBlackittyrose004: May 21, 2008, 3:11:03 AM
A most deep message, and definitely emotionally provoking. :) Love the structure, spacing out those last few lines I think was very necessary and well worth the effects it brought out. :D

Great stuff!!

:blackrose:

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*Beautifull-Freak:iconBeautifull-Freak: May 21, 2008, 5:52:39 AM

Thank you so much! I hadn't expected any comments on this, especially not this deep. It means a lot to me!

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Stand out on the edge of the stage
Dive into the center of t'crowd
Walk right on the hands of the fans
Glare into this new fangirl's face

It's not a matter of duck, it's just a matter of thyme
*Blackittyrose004:iconBlackittyrose004: May 22, 2008, 1:21:32 PM
:aww: Well I know I don't ever expect much because my work is for me, but I am always happy to hear things about it! I'm glad it meant a lot :D I always do try to be very meaningful in my comments..and it was such a deep and lovely piece!!

:blackrose:

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